The opening of this sequence it particularly successful in creating suspense. The combination of the overlapping voices and the still shots of the murder scene were simple but effective. Perhaps greater emphasis on her final sentence would have created a more dramatic impact on the audience. But overall, a very good video :)
LiamandImii 24 minutes ago
The lighting is really good as it to creates spooky atmosphere. It also reminds me of CSI. And it makes the me curious about who the killer is because both of the actors look suspicious.
H2squareo
I love the story of this thriller and the lighting really creates a mysterious effect and the sound is really interesting, good work you gys!
butterfliesg 38 minutes ago
I liked the opening - seeing the victims while credits are coming up and not using any soundtrack music.
The whole sequence reminds me of thrillers such as saw and se7en. But the last sentence of her revealing it was murder should be a bit more in the foreground and emphasized.
nice editing, good shot choices. Sound effects make it seem realistic, overall fantastic piece!
hollfinlay 42 minutes ago
I think that the issues raised by these YouTube comments are very true, I agree that we didnt push the emphasis on the last line enough but i also particulary liked the opening few seconds with the police dispatch radio. Hearing other peoples comments can open your eyes alot to things that you compleatly otherwise overlooked, when you get so close and familiar to a project to start to look at it in a 'glanceing-over' 'I-already-know-this' manner, rather than the with the critical eye that you would if veiwing for the first time so hearing people that still see the project critically can be a really big held in noticing errors such as continuity mistakes.
LiamandImii 24 minutes ago
The lighting is really good as it to creates spooky atmosphere. It also reminds me of CSI. And it makes the me curious about who the killer is because both of the actors look suspicious.
H2squareo
I love the story of this thriller and the lighting really creates a mysterious effect and the sound is really interesting, good work you gys!
butterfliesg 38 minutes ago
I liked the opening - seeing the victims while credits are coming up and not using any soundtrack music.
The whole sequence reminds me of thrillers such as saw and se7en. But the last sentence of her revealing it was murder should be a bit more in the foreground and emphasized.
nice editing, good shot choices. Sound effects make it seem realistic, overall fantastic piece!
hollfinlay 42 minutes ago
I think that the issues raised by these YouTube comments are very true, I agree that we didnt push the emphasis on the last line enough but i also particulary liked the opening few seconds with the police dispatch radio. Hearing other peoples comments can open your eyes alot to things that you compleatly otherwise overlooked, when you get so close and familiar to a project to start to look at it in a 'glanceing-over' 'I-already-know-this' manner, rather than the with the critical eye that you would if veiwing for the first time so hearing people that still see the project critically can be a really big held in noticing errors such as continuity mistakes.
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